Tuesday, January 12, 2010

Sometimes I get confused…


Often I get confused when I walk…
Often I get stuck when I talk…
I don’t know where I am heading…
Neither do I know where I may end…
The only thing I know is my art…
That writes my heart out on paper…
And keeps on dying as the days go…
All I can do is to write and tear…
That makes me never sad and fear…
The fear of my dreams that never came true…
It’s time to tear and forgive the fear…
Forgive myself for not pushing in…
And walk the black pavements to give in…
My dreams, My love and everything that moves around…
---Amit Purohit (The Lone Soldier)

14 comments:

Mohit said...

You blow my mind with your versatility. From magical love poems to profound and intense wisdom. Keep it up you're getting better each time you write.

The Lone Soldier said...

@Mohit..
the next one is the sequel to the passing days..
badly need a break

Mohit said...

Ahh atleast I will be definately waiting for the next one..

Mohit said...

Believe in the beauty of your dreams and the almighty.. As always this time shall too pass...

Ruhani said...

You cannot control what happens to you, but you can control your attitude toward what happens to you, and in that, you will be mastering change rather than allowing it to master you.
In the confrontation between the stream and the rock, the stream always wins – not through strength, but through persistence.
- - - Hri & Vishalakshi

The Lone Soldier said...

@ Ruhani
Lets see..who wins I am already too tired to fight more..

Ruhani said...

The first step towards getting somewhere is to decide that you aren't going to stay where you are. Let go of yourself, only then you can move towards the divinity..

Ruhani said...

The first step towards getting somewhere is to decide that you aren't going to stay where you are. Let go of yourself, only then you can move towards the divinity..

Saideep said...

I believe in you boy, and it's so nice to see I am not the only one:)
Have a fantabulous day.
God bless you, son.

Saideep said...

Now that you’re gone, I realize
How much you meant to me.
My loss is wide as a starless night sky,
And deep as a stormy sea.


I miss the comfort of your sweet love,
Your absolute devotion;
Now I’m a fountain of endless tears,
A pool of sad emotion.


They tell me I should move on with life,
That time will heal my pain;
I smile and nod and agree with them,
While I slowly go insane.

The Lone Soldier said...

@Saideep

Nice one..

Saideep said...

Ahh those lines just came to me while reading your blog.. I read the new poem there.. the sequel one.. In real hurry now so will comment on that later. Good work. Keep it up boy! Take care.. God Bless. Cya

Priya said...

Thanks for dropping by. Its not you, humans are always confused with so called inner emotions.

amit said...

@Priya
Thanks for reading..
Ya i agree we are all emotionally confused..