Monday, October 11, 2010

Let Me Be Myself...

Let me be…

Let me live the way I can…
And let my dreams swell insane
Late night coffee sips and mental drifts…
Some lights; loud sounds; my table mundane
Let me love the way I can…
Cozy afternoons dripping in rain
My old scooter and the feather touch…
Rolling eyes; Ice creams; walking the deserted walk ways...
Let me lead to love the way I can…
Living apart with the pain all slain
The soul striving harder to the roads…
All lost; found and lost again
Let me dream the way I can…
Piercing the clouds;
Prickling the skies…
And picking the stars once again
Let me die the way I can…
Let it be magnificent the way it can
And let these words be the epitaph…
Let the world wait to see me again…!

Surat, 11:57 pm

It is raining! Often I write at the end of my odes something about my mental stance that made me to write the ode. But this time I am running out of words. I actually don’t know what made me pen this. Is it the directionless way of living or the well crafted foreseen failure I fear, I deem…

It is time to hear my favorite track from the film ‘Udaan’. It’s called Azaadiyaan…!

Let me set myself free…!

Amit Purohit The Lone Soldier
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15 comments:

Sourav C. Pandey said...

Your post reminds me of one of my own post too! Liked yours, check this I am sure you'd strike out some similarities!

http://www.souravpandey.in/2010/05/escape.html

honeybunchsugarplum said...

this doesn't exactly seem like 'running out of words' to me... :) nice post!

The Lone Soldier said...

@ sourav
thanks for reading
i read the post called 'escape' u posted on ur blog

it is really heart wrenching

The Lone Soldier said...

@ honeybunchsugarplum..
thanks for reading
ur comment motivates

Priya said...

hey amit.. i found myself get carried away by each and every line of ur piece of writing.. u write amazing..such deep thoughts.. great

The Lone Soldier said...

@ priya
thanks ur comment motivates

vinita said...

Great yaar, mujhe pata nahi tha tu itna acha likhta hai yaar. keep it up yaar.

palak said...

Great yaar....lovely deep thought...

Songsnwords said...

Wow!! Some moving words and pieces you've got here...I really liked " my old school" and "life is far"...not many pen words on their school days...hoping to get a glimpse of more such gems. ;) Ciao.

The Lone Soldier said...

@rekha
thanks for reading i writewhatever i feel

Deepika Vasudeva said...

beautiful poetry...
really really loved it like anything.

p.s.- keep writing. don't stop :)

The Fallen Poet said...

amazing write...very well written...i love the very minute details and respect your perception n observation about them....if you want you can always try
allpoetry.com
its the biggest online community of poets...where you'll get a lot of reads and suggestions...

good luck anyways

The Lone Soldier said...

@ the fallen poet

thanks for reading
keep tracking

Neha Gupta said...

Simply awesome!

The Lone Soldier said...

@ Neha

Thanks for reading.
please keep tracking the latest