Let me be…
Let me live the way I can…
And let my dreams swell insane
Late night coffee sips and mental drifts…
Some lights; loud sounds; my table mundane
Let me love the way I can…
Cozy afternoons dripping in rain
My old scooter and the feather touch…
Rolling eyes; Ice creams; walking the deserted walk ways...
Let me lead to love the way I can…
Living apart with the pain all slain
The soul striving harder to the roads…
All lost; found and lost again
Let me dream the way I can…
Piercing the clouds;
Prickling the skies…
And picking the stars once again
Let me die the way I can…
Let it be magnificent the way it can
And let these words be the epitaph…
Let the world wait to see me again…!
Surat, 11:57 pm
It is raining! Often I write at the end of my odes something about my mental stance that made me to write the ode. But this time I am running out of words. I actually don’t know what made me pen this. Is it the directionless way of living or the well crafted foreseen failure I fear, I deem…
It is time to hear my favorite track from the film ‘Udaan’. It’s called Azaadiyaan…!
Let me set myself free…!
Amit Purohit The Lone Soldier
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15 comments:
Your post reminds me of one of my own post too! Liked yours, check this I am sure you'd strike out some similarities!
http://www.souravpandey.in/2010/05/escape.html
this doesn't exactly seem like 'running out of words' to me... :) nice post!
@ sourav
thanks for reading
i read the post called 'escape' u posted on ur blog
it is really heart wrenching
@ honeybunchsugarplum..
thanks for reading
ur comment motivates
hey amit.. i found myself get carried away by each and every line of ur piece of writing.. u write amazing..such deep thoughts.. great
@ priya
thanks ur comment motivates
Great yaar, mujhe pata nahi tha tu itna acha likhta hai yaar. keep it up yaar.
Great yaar....lovely deep thought...
Wow!! Some moving words and pieces you've got here...I really liked " my old school" and "life is far"...not many pen words on their school days...hoping to get a glimpse of more such gems. ;) Ciao.
@rekha
thanks for reading i writewhatever i feel
beautiful poetry...
really really loved it like anything.
p.s.- keep writing. don't stop :)
amazing write...very well written...i love the very minute details and respect your perception n observation about them....if you want you can always try
allpoetry.com
its the biggest online community of poets...where you'll get a lot of reads and suggestions...
good luck anyways
@ the fallen poet
thanks for reading
keep tracking
Simply awesome!
@ Neha
Thanks for reading.
please keep tracking the latest
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