Sunday, January 31, 2010


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I am back from the maximum city. I wrote this poem a week back. But time flew like the hasting birds making it to their home in the evening..

This is a sequel to my poem 'The Passing Days'. It is called 'The Passing Days Continue..


The Passing Days Continue…

Again the sun rises and a dawn begins…
The same smoke and the same siren rings

Zephyr in ambience and the lone soldier at war…
That never ends on the pages of satisfaction

My clutching hands finding the tablet…
That soothes my soaring back…

Which aches a lot as I remain glued...?
To the screen I stare day in and out

My motionless pace and the change so seldom
The loss so dear and the soul so ridden

The free soul covets some space
And the poetic heart badly needs some ink…

All I could do is kill the burning time…
Burning…my dreams and draining my energy

Repent on what I am doing now,
And get paid at the bloody end as obvious…

The same smoke and the same sun
The free birds and the soul buttoned…

The bloody time stifling the free soul
And I bold enough to hold the smile so foul…

--- Amit Purohit (The Lone Soldier)

16 comments:

Mohit said...

It seemed incomplete.. May b something else should be there in addition..

The Lone Soldier said...

@ Mohit..
yes it might seem incomplete as it is written in a state of being and feeling incomplete...

Mohit said...

the effort doesn't result as it should..may be the real source of energy lies sumwhere else..

The Lone Soldier said...

@Mohit
may be..

EKTA said...

He has given us with everything.. No one is alone then.. Its our duty to obey him now without complaining.. It is just that your will to write was more true.. It depends on you on how to take things and how to let people react on yours..

The Lone Soldier said...

It is my turn to live and make things bigger than imagined...!!

EKTA said...

So u wnt go with the ppl or god who helped when needed more than possible.. Your wish then next time don't xpect anything from HIM. No need to react so.. its not her its me...

Ruhani said...

It was our duty to try and give our best.. Rest if ppl give u importance as god then its on u on hw to tk it n react or may wrk acordingly too!! doesnt seem so

Ruhani said...

I could hav uploaded stf in our favor or could hav written anything..but let me tel u the comment wasn't meant 4 u or to lower u.. All she would say at this moment is Gud Luck.. Try accepting the facts rather than ditching yourself and moving ahead ..

Ruhani said...

Shubh Shivratri.. May the smiles last forever.. Yes its your turn for only god knws what but have already done things out of imagination. . . Anyways it is strange that "oracle" didnt identify that he is worsening things for someone who is nomore there.. But still a soul exists..

Mohit said...

Hi bro..
Long time .. What happened no poems yet.. Seem busy.. People like me are waiting.. Any hints of the upcomings or the process..

Hope things are fine.. Take care

Saideep said...

Don’t wish it were easier, wish you were better.
Keep goin son..

The Lone Soldier said...

@Saideep

& Mohit

I have rewritten Saideep's poem i will poost it soon

Mohit said...

Oh woh toh dekhni baki hai.. Sure waiting buddy..

Glen said...

Ya let me mention guyz.. A bit of awesome was too less at voicesnet... Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome ..did i say Awesome :-)
Man what r u made up of?!!
The first thing next to your search on google is your blog. Do I need to say anything more than that to people or to u.. Gud Luck

Amit Purohit (The Lone Soldier) said...

@ Glen
Thanks...