Sunday, May 23, 2010

The Love So Far...

The Love So Far...


It feels great to share with you all my hundredth creation on love. It has been almost thousand days by now since I have began writing poems and articles. It has been a busy fortnight. First week went off in finding a house and second getting in along with the alien neighbors and surroundings. I had cultivated a weird hobby since my college times to store all the chat texts I receive. ‘The Love So far’ is inspired from the texts that I received from the one who I think made me feel what living is. I went on reading the texts and the conversation became as animated as yesterday’s talk. I kept my mobile aside, sauntered in the balcony watched the moon grouped by the stars. The only thing now we had in common was the one I gazed now – sky laden stars. All lost was the way we had come in life to achieve the dreams which we thought would be realized and got daggered away in the end…! I closed my eyes, which missed its eyelids resting far somewhere and wrote this…!

I feel her fingers in my palm…
   Rubbing and scratching it all the time
Her tender thumbs and shiny nails
   All this she does to make me go smile…
Often I feel her lips fused onto mine…
   Making me dumb; putting me out of sign
It cuts me off from the world sometimes…
   Animating my warmth; flashing back the rosy time…
I feel the clouds shaping like her gestures
   Makes me laugh whenever I move alone
And when I see her radiant face dancing over
   Makes me look mad as I move along…
My love for her and the way I miss her
   Flows from my blue pen and floats on paper…
With I exposed to the world to compete...
  And the aboriginal soul left somewhere to feel incomplete...!!!

Amit Purohit The Lone Soldier


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10 comments:

manan said...

Awesome bro...Wat an imagination!!!!!!Read ur poem 4 d 1st tym...it's simply superb......

palak said...

yar superb love thought...........

The Lone Soldier said...

@manan and palak..
thanks..
keep tracking...!!!

The Lone Soldier said...

ur comments are the penultimate source of inspiration...!!

Samanvita said...

Hey hi..Hope you remember your followers:-) sorry a long time...no comments but yes i did follow you regularly..... Nice writings there yar.. Ya i just wanted you to check out this since you are the inspiration. I know its foolish but the reason behind it is very true. Please check out & let me know :-) Take care..Regards...
http://www.devotiontothesacredheart.blogspot.com/

The Lone Soldier said...

thanks for reading

The Unknown Soul said...

So what are u planning next? Please have a look. Tc

http://devotiontothesacredheart.blogspot.com/2010/06/you-went.html

The Lone Soldier said...

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The Unknown Soul said...

ok :-) may life bless you with all hapiness. I read the next post.. Its gud.. Rite now client calling...will have to go.. bye tc
Samanvita

The Lone Soldier said...

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